Reflection

This paper was kind of interesting. I enjoyed researching my topic because it was something that actually I was actually interested. I came up with my topic after choosing many different topics. Then I was watching TV one day and a comercial about Michelle Obama's campagin came on. That commercial inspired me to pick this topic and to find out more about how the government is influencing societys diet. To write this paper first I looked up information on the internet. Then I made an outline using the information I found. After that my piece came together. After submitting my first draft and reading the comments I was quite confused. Then I re read my paper again and found out some places that needed fixing. For me that was the hardest part. I am one of those people who after writing a paper can't find anything wrong with it. For this assignment I think peer review wouldve been prety helpful to me, just because I like to get a lot of opinions on my papers. This paper was a lot different from the first paper because in the first paper you were telling the audience information you weren't persuading them to pick a side where in this paper the goal of an argument is to get your auidence to agree with you. The first paper had no argument it was just information about a topic.

Outline

Samantha Mclean
Outline
English 102
3/6/15


I. Introduction
a. Description of topic

II. Body
a. American Diet
b.Why they should have a say
c. Why they should not & Government regulated meals
d. My opinion
III. Body 2
a. Obesity in the states
b. Fast food industry
c. Does population care

IV. Conclusion
a. Summary of topic