Analysis of an English 101 Paper

                      In English 101 we wrote a rhetorical analysis on an argument of todays pop culture. In my essay I wrote about the topic of abortion. We used a rhetorical writting format to make our argument stronger by using Ethos, Logos, and Pathos. Those really helped our argument because it appealed to people and made them actually think about the argument. The assignment had to be persuasive and those three techniques really helped my argument be persuasive. My argument was a very touchy subject so I had to make sure I wrote it in a way of making people think about abortion in depth but without offending anyone. My argument was on the side of pro choice so I got to find out a lot about abortion I didn't know about. I feel as if my argument came out pretty well, when we did peer review it was really making the other kids in my group really think about abortion and that was my goal. I took this peice to the writing center and they said I didn't really hit the Ethos, Logos, Pathos aspect, that I should go back and revise that part. I did that for my final copy of my paper and it actually came out better than I epected.